The whole reading experience, from the typewriter aesthetic to the wonderful story combines into a beautiful bite-sized joy. This is living a memory, in its best form
So happy to read the published version! Loved, loved how it turned out. Your great quality writing, now applied to fiction, makes us all the more complete. I want more stories!
It's such an amazing world and concept you've developed here with so few words, what a colorful imagination you have. Glad she could readjust her memory, will try to do that someday ;)
I could totally feel that painful experience and how we spin and swim in life’s refrigerator!
...wonderful as always...pouring a glass of dogwalking sunrise up a misted hill...
The whole reading experience, from the typewriter aesthetic to the wonderful story combines into a beautiful bite-sized joy. This is living a memory, in its best form
Woah! The peace and watermelon juice in the sky imagery was some baller imagery Sandra! Great job.
This piece reminded me of what it's like to go through your photo albums, but much richer.
Such a delightful read!
So glad I got to read this. I savored every word, like a dessert eaten with a tiny spoon, to enjoy it longer. Exquisite writing!
So beautifully written, I mean both the words and the feels. Keep it up Sandra!
I felt like I was there! This was really cool.
I finally have words for how your writing makes me feel: like a sky someone squeezed watermelon and peach juice on!
This was really, really wonderful.
What an awesome change of pace. This was incredible, Sandra. More fiction please.
So happy to read the published version! Loved, loved how it turned out. Your great quality writing, now applied to fiction, makes us all the more complete. I want more stories!
It's such an amazing world and concept you've developed here with so few words, what a colorful imagination you have. Glad she could readjust her memory, will try to do that someday ;)
So, what is she going to work on now?
This was so fun. And so beautiful.
Damn, this rocks. What a treat. <3
Such a creative plot / concept of memories in bottles - would love to read more a pt 2 / 3 /4!
Wow Sandra. I’ve been thinking about how to make my writing more beautiful, more of an aesthetic experience and you blew me away here.
Love it :)