The whole reading experience, from the typewriter aesthetic to the wonderful story combines into a beautiful bite-sized joy. This is living a memory, in its best form
Yes - it's like when you go through your pictures at the end of the year and get a lot of memory flashes. Except that when you describe it as putting it in a bottle, it's like capturing all of the senses in that photo if that makes sense
So happy to read the published version! Loved, loved how it turned out. Your great quality writing, now applied to fiction, makes us all the more complete. I want more stories!
It's such an amazing world and concept you've developed here with so few words, what a colorful imagination you have. Glad she could readjust her memory, will try to do that someday ;)
I think she'll fix a few more of her memories, before jumping into a grand crusade of fixing all the messed up memories of humanity as a whole. Cheers to her!
Honored that Sunday Candy can be a source of motivation to data it up. It's honest work, but someone's gotta motivate the data people. I hear they have many addictions. I'll be thrilled if Sunday Candy becomes one.
I could totally feel that painful experience and how we spin and swim in life’s refrigerator!
...wonderful as always...pouring a glass of dogwalking sunrise up a misted hill...
beautiful -- turn that into a story.
The whole reading experience, from the typewriter aesthetic to the wonderful story combines into a beautiful bite-sized joy. This is living a memory, in its best form
"beautiful bite-sized joy"---Damn, I love that, Derek.
Also, it made me smile to see you came to read it like you said you would!! Thank you.
Woah! The peace and watermelon juice in the sky imagery was some baller imagery Sandra! Great job.
This piece reminded me of what it's like to go through your photo albums, but much richer.
Hahaha baller imagery! Thank you, Baxter. I appreciate that you ended up reading!!
Photo albums? Can you say more?
Yes - it's like when you go through your pictures at the end of the year and get a lot of memory flashes. Except that when you describe it as putting it in a bottle, it's like capturing all of the senses in that photo if that makes sense
Yes, it does!! I love that, Baxter.
Such a delightful read!
Thank you, Miche<3
So glad I got to read this. I savored every word, like a dessert eaten with a tiny spoon, to enjoy it longer. Exquisite writing!
Whoa Diana. This is one of my favorite compliments I've gotten. Thank you for savoring!
So beautifully written, I mean both the words and the feels. Keep it up Sandra!
Words and feels!! You get me, Jonas.
Thank you for checking this out and letting me know what you think!
I felt like I was there! This was really cool.
You were! Somewhere in the clouds, I think.
I finally have words for how your writing makes me feel: like a sky someone squeezed watermelon and peach juice on!
Lol what does this mean!
It's comforting and I constantly revel in the beauty <3
P.S. I'd like this on the rocks please.
Me tooo
This was really, really wonderful.
Reading this comment was also really, really wonderful 😌
What an awesome change of pace. This was incredible, Sandra. More fiction please.
You got it, Randy 🫡
So happy to read the published version! Loved, loved how it turned out. Your great quality writing, now applied to fiction, makes us all the more complete. I want more stories!
It's such an amazing world and concept you've developed here with so few words, what a colorful imagination you have. Glad she could readjust her memory, will try to do that someday ;)
So, what is she going to work on now?
Haha the stories will come!! I think.
Thank you for your help and encouragement with this one. It means the world to me.
It's a mystery---what do you, dear reader, think she's going to work on now?
I think she'll fix a few more of her memories, before jumping into a grand crusade of fixing all the messed up memories of humanity as a whole. Cheers to her!
ALL the messed up memories of humanity?!
My god, man. Your dreams for her are ambitious.
Tell HER, I can't control her ambitions
This was so fun. And so beautiful.
Thank you for reading :)
But...it's not Wednesday. This is not graphs or boring things, Henri. Data awaits!!
I feel so caught out! Don’t tell the data people, okay! I needed some Sunday Candy for motivation.
You ARE the data people!! You are your own enemy!
Honored that Sunday Candy can be a source of motivation to data it up. It's honest work, but someone's gotta motivate the data people. I hear they have many addictions. I'll be thrilled if Sunday Candy becomes one.
Unless this IS the boring things. Is this the boring things??!
😂
There's only one way to interpret your lack of "no!" 🫠
Damn, this rocks. What a treat. <3
No, you rocks. You’re the treat!
Such a creative plot / concept of memories in bottles - would love to read more a pt 2 / 3 /4!
I agree. This could be a series.
Also thank you for letting me know you thought the plot and concept are creative ! And for reading :)
Really?! You like it? :)
I don’t know if I have more parts in me !
Wow Sandra. I’ve been thinking about how to make my writing more beautiful, more of an aesthetic experience and you blew me away here.
Love it :)
Oh. thank you for the kind words, Tommy!